Cartier-Bresson Image Critique:
I picked this image because the picture seems to be focused on a scene within a large hole in wall. The backdrop is filled with kids of seemingly the same age. The kids also look as though they are laughing and playing on top of rubble created from the broken and crumbled sections of fallen walls. The symbolism within the photo brings to bear a view that the kids are not in distress because of the location or that they may have found a way to pass the time. Maybe the environmental conditions are common and normal to their everyday life. Either way, the photo is intriguing and very eye catching.
The photo represents a frame within a frame. The broken wall is the oval edges of the framing. The jagged edges of the oval create rough variations around the focal points. The composition of the photo is full of uneven lines, shapes and patterns. All of which help portray a story of survival and destruction. I think that adding color would not improve the photo. The expressions of laughter clearly come to the surface in the black and white imagery. The negative space on the edges and upper background help to guide your eye to the focal points.The picture has an asymmetrical balance, allowing for a interesting overall design.
First Progress review: