The first picture is composed giving focus and light to the artwork. This image does a good job on telling the viewer that you are a football fan. It shows a lot of depth because the words in the picture describe the type of fan you are. I like that the image is not resting in the center and has negative space around it. The second picture is really good composition-wise. The lighting, the focus on the face with the positive natural expression and the fact that the sort is being watched outside which gives us visual variety compared to the house. The third picture with the kid is really good as a little kid would have different facial expressions than adults. I think since the kid is wearing gear, he was in focus and the background was blur. I like that you used this effect but I wish the picture would have been a bot closer to the kid, filling more of the frame or even better taken in portrait position instead of landscape. The fourth image is really good, the focus is throughout the image but the flash brings the attention back to the dogs face. This picture could have more asymmetrical and not perfectly balanced like the first one. The fifth image has a cool effect with the depth perception but I am not really sure whether this is following your story. Its the hats through the railing and outside. Image 6 is alright but Image 7 is where I think you did a super awesome job. If this was the first image in your sequence then the viewers would immediately know which team is being supported. Nevertheless, the effect of the blur and sharp are done extremely well. Image 7 is very unique and the fact that the image made you and the kid blurry as you have been photographed previously and focused on the other 2 people was a really good idea. The image gives a sense of family being together, but the focus is shifted as well to the other members. I liked ho you tied the images back to your actual reaction to the game and shows what it means to you. You did a pretty good job in the composition of your images and the ideas worked well with your topic.
The first picture is composed giving focus and light to the artwork. This image does a good job on telling the viewer that you are a football fan. It shows a lot of depth because the words in the picture describe the type of fan you are. I like that the image is not resting in the center and has negative space around it.
ReplyDeleteThe second picture is really good composition-wise. The lighting, the focus on the face with the positive natural expression and the fact that the sort is being watched outside which gives us visual variety compared to the house.
The third picture with the kid is really good as a little kid would have different facial expressions than adults. I think since the kid is wearing gear, he was in focus and the background was blur. I like that you used this effect but I wish the picture would have been a bot closer to the kid, filling more of the frame or even better taken in portrait position instead of landscape.
The fourth image is really good, the focus is throughout the image but the flash brings the attention back to the dogs face. This picture could have more asymmetrical and not perfectly balanced like the first one.
The fifth image has a cool effect with the depth perception but I am not really sure whether this is following your story. Its the hats through the railing and outside.
Image 6 is alright but Image 7 is where I think you did a super awesome job. If this was the first image in your sequence then the viewers would immediately know which team is being supported. Nevertheless, the effect of the blur and sharp are done extremely well.
Image 7 is very unique and the fact that the image made you and the kid blurry as you have been photographed previously and focused on the other 2 people was a really good idea. The image gives a sense of family being together, but the focus is shifted as well to the other members.
I liked ho you tied the images back to your actual reaction to the game and shows what it means to you.
You did a pretty good job in the composition of your images and the ideas worked well with your topic.